The next chapter in Telan's Tale. Enjoy :)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/6bhys2930fdhj0d/Telan%E2%80%99s%20Tale-Fires%20of%20the%20Forest.pdf?dl=0
I find this fun to read and am annoyed that I have reached the end. Haha. I really like that this story is moving around the world. It adds to the intrigue. I not only want to know 'what' will happen but 'where' it will all end. Also, talk about setting the mood... The skies had continued to darken, clouds becomingheavy with rain, and low rolling thunder was regularly heard. “The beast growls at ourapproach.”
Therek, good job. Nice to see some stories incorporating the lore well. Keep it up. Oh, and personally I think you a good job of mixing the dialogue and narration. A lot of the stories on here get caught up doing one or the other. It flows so much nicer with a good mix.
~Benonai