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Telan's Tale: Fires of the Forest

    • 197 posts
    June 17, 2019 5:41 PM PDT
    • 372 posts
    June 17, 2019 7:49 PM PDT

    I find this fun to read and am annoyed that I have reached the end.  Haha.  I really like that this story is moving around the world. It adds to the intrigue. I not only want to know 'what' will happen but 'where' it will all end.  Also, talk about setting the mood... The skies had continued to darken, clouds becomingheavy with rain, and low rolling thunder was regularly heard. “The beast growls at ourapproach.”

    • 2886 posts
    June 26, 2019 5:32 PM PDT

    This is great! :)

    • 197 posts
    June 27, 2019 4:55 AM PDT

    Thanks for the kind words to both of you!

    • 337 posts
    August 15, 2019 12:08 PM PDT

    Therek, good job.  Nice to see some stories incorporating the lore well.  Keep it up. Oh, and personally I think you a good job of mixing the dialogue and narration.  A lot of the stories on here get caught up doing one or the other.  It flows so much nicer with a good mix.

    ~Benonai

    • 197 posts
    August 16, 2019 6:56 AM PDT

    Thanks Benonai, appreciate the feedback!

    • 125 posts
    September 17, 2019 4:36 PM PDT
    So glad I don’t have to wait for the next part!