I‘m really enjoying this story so far! The uneasy conraderie between the group, or at least between Daniel and the other members, is intriguing. Definetely want to see how that develops. A good party you’ve got there too; Warrior, Druid, Summoner, Wizard, Rogue....seems you are short one for a full group. I heard there was a Dire Lord wasting his talents as a bouncer LFG :) Keep up the great work!!!
Look... if you're gonna write some good stories, you can't ruin them on the opener. Making Doo? Really? You made chocolate milk come out of my nose at the lunch table! And why have they been making doo for the last six months? Isn't it about time for the next chapter, "The Party Wipes."